Sounds promising, but please please please get a better quality version up first! Now I'm just guessing how good the actual song sounds like. :-D

Hey Csar,



Good tune man 8) kind of electro'y, with a breaks feel. i really liked the main riff/melody thing that ran through the whole thing, very slinky - and the added melody which came in in the breakdown/later on was really good - kind of live, but still felt very electronic - quite ecstasy :)



couple of observations for ya:



1) your mix is REALLY quiet - i had to crank my mixer to get it to any decent volume. dunno what your using, but in your audio editor, get the WAV of your tune and you can normalize it which takes the volume up to maximum.



2) i dunno if it was because of the mp3 compression, but the hi-hats sounded a little lost. - and from a personal point oif view, if you'd have bought them in a bit earlier in the tune (i think they dont appear until 2 mins odd??) it would give it a little lift. just an opinion of course ;) :)



yeah, thats about it really - good work!!



Mips



ps - if you still want that geezers e-mail for sample cd's PM me and ill send you the details. 8)

basingstoke would explain the liz hurley grandfather story!! liz hurley does not speak like a typical basingstoke girl!!

ha! no, she definitely doesnt :) her families actually really posh, her grandad was cool, really old and wobbly, used to wear a wax jacket and neckerchief, and turn up on one of those old motorbikes with a sidecar on it. genius.

Hi!



Well I don't know which quality you have chosen but the second one has 96 kb/s with about 3,89 mb I guess. When I compressed it, it sounded quiet good, almost like 128 kb/s... If you chose the version with about 900 kb (the whole track) it might sound too bad, I know.

The version with about 900 kb has only 24 kb/s. That could be a reason for it..

Hey i liked the track. the beats reminded me of the one from TPPR...no seriously, good work. I can never make a track like that......i just don't have the 'it'...



you need a better version man!!! I love the main riff, totally rocks!!

Csar Escribi�:

Well I don't know which quality you have chosen but the second one has 96 kb/s with about 3,89 mb I guess. When I compressed it, it sounded quiet good, almost like 128 kb/s... If you chose the version with about 900 kb (the whole track) it might sound too bad, I know.

I was referring to the 96 kb/s one. It's still not enough :) ... your version is like 96 kb/s with 32 kHz when I'd like to see atleast 128 kb/s with 44 kHz ... 160 kb/s all the better.



Tracks tend to get a metal glint when the bitrate is too low. If you think that the song sounds now almost as good as the original uncompressed one then I have to say that your drums sound too ...wet I think. But I believe that they would sound much better if you uploaded a better quality version.



You have made a great song whatsoever! The bassline is nice and the riff is veeery nice... 8-bit era videogame influence? 8)

This was an idea i was knocking around a while back it was posted in the who makes music thread but no one really gave me any feedback so im gonna repost it and see what you guys think cheers.

http://homepage.ntlw...derick/acid.mp3

That's pretty sweet, griffin. :)



Csar: awesome. Really, fantastic!!

i like your style griffin, reminds me Block Rockin Beats at some places. i love whatcha did with the beats :D

Do I hear a TS404? This is quite big beatish. Makes me wanna get up and start going nuts. Nice breaks and snare samples. I love that synth that comes in near the end.

soundertow Escribi�:

Csar Escribi�:

Well I don't know which quality you have chosen but the second one has 96 kb/s with about 3,89 mb I guess. When I compressed it, it sounded quiet good, almost like 128 kb/s... If you chose the version with about 900 kb (the whole track) it might sound too bad, I know.

I was referring to the 96 kb/s one. It's still not enough :) ... your version is like 96 kb/s with 32 kHz when I'd like to see atleast 128 kb/s with 44 kHz ... 160 kb/s all the better.



Tracks tend to get a metal glint when the bitrate is too low. If you think that the song sounds now almost as good as the original uncompressed one then I have to say that your drums sound too ...wet I think. But I believe that they would sound much better if you uploaded a better quality version.



You have made a great song whatsoever! The bassline is nice and the riff is veeery nice... 8-bit era videogame influence? 8)

Hi Soundertow!



Thanks for the review! And I believe you're right concerning the bitrate. 128 kb/s might be better a little. But there's a little problem because I'm using a modem with about 56 kb you know and if I want to post songs with about 5MB or more i have to wait and wait till the track is uploaded. Grass growing is much faster than this kind of technology. But in the future I hope it will become better... ;-)

Thor_Saytyr Escribi�:

Do I hear a TS404? This is quite big beatish. Makes me wanna get up and start going nuts. Nice breaks and snare samples. I love that synth that comes in near the end.

Hi Thor_Saytyr!



Did you mean me or Griffin?

chemicalreaction Escribi�:

Hey i liked the track. the beats reminded me of the one from TPPR...no seriously, good work. I can never make a track like that......i just don't have the 'it'...



you need a better version man!!! I love the main riff, totally rocks!!

Greet you Mr. Reaction! X-D



Well did you mean the version concerning the bitrate? I'm glad to give you pleasure.Feels nice hearing those comments... thank you.

griffin Escribi�:

This was an idea i was knocking around a while back it was posted in the who makes music thread but no one really gave me any feedback so im gonna repost it and see what you guys think cheers.

http://homepage.ntlw...derick/acid.mp3

http://forums.theche...pic.php?p=19119



So I'm no one .. :?

:-// My bad I knew someone gave me feedback i just forgot who! Anyway thanks for the reply again and to everyone else who has or will reply and your certainly not a no one i just got a bad memory X-D

To much of smoking the wacky backy

Csar Escribi�:

Thor_Saytyr Escribi�:

Do I hear a TS404? This is quite big beatish. Makes me wanna get up and start going nuts. Nice breaks and snare samples. I love that synth that comes in near the end.

Hi Thor_Saytyr!



Did you mean me or Griffin?

Your song.

Hi everybody!



Here there's a "new" song (it's an earlier track) called "One Flight Over The Ocean".

Hope you'll enoy it... And reviews are welcome, of course, doesn't matter in which direction bad or good. Just what you think... X-D



http://www.track4.de...b89b59e727b971e